Secrets are meant to be Kept (Secrets (Alternate))

Is it worth the risk of judgemental eyes
Looking you over a second time?
Or the way they stop and silently stare
Whenever you're close enough to hear?
How about your friends?
Would they still love you then,
when you pour out your heart in the table?
Just keep it all in:
How you wish to be thin,
For some secrets are meant to be kept.

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Is it worth the risk of judgemental eyes
Looking you over a second time?
Or the way they stop and silently stare
Whenever you're close enough to hear?
How about your friends?
Would they still love you then,
when you pour out your heart in the table?
Just keep it all in,
For the balance is thin,
And some secrets are meant to be kept.

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This is my most normal writing style. Sort of rhyming and sort of meter... but not really. Highly irregular. Like me. I wrote the second version so I could post it at non-ana places... but give me your opinion... Which is better? Honestly, I can't choose.